Wednesday, July 21, 2010

You and I .....


Lets go to a place,
away from all,
lets hold our hands,
and let the leaves fall.


Lets have a conversation,
but don't utter a word,
and let the eyes speak,
all the words unheard.


Lets feel the life,
lets feel the death,
lets come closer,
and feel the breath.


lets go to the other world,
and lets see all its color,
lets forget everything,
and let this busy world go blur.


lets sing a silent song,
lets have a tearless cry,
come and take me to a world,
where there's only YOU AND I...!!!


You and I…. In this beautiful world :) :)


1 comment:

  1. Lets go to a place,
    away from all,
    lets hold our hands,
    and let the leaves fall.-----arr wats this... chnge this

    Lets have a conversation,
    but don't utter a word,---arr chng it...>Lets have a conversation, without a word
    and let the eyes speak,---arr chng it...>Let the eyes speak out the heart all the unheard.
    all the words unheard.

    Lets feel the life,--->Lets feel the life with no fear of death,lets come closer to feel the heart of a breadth
    lets feel the death,
    lets come closer,
    and feel the breath.

    lets go to the other world,--->lets go to the world just to see all the colors.Lets get colored in the joys and faintout the sorrows
    and lets see all its color,--->delete
    lets forget everything,--->delete
    and let this busy world go blur.--->delete

    lets sing a silent song,
    lets have a tearless cry,
    come and take me to a world,
    where there's only YOU AND I...!!!

    You and I…. In this beautiful world :) :)



    --->jst a concerned changes...frm a frnd...Vkool...hope u dont mind...I felt it didnt rhyme...

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